Actually, I shouldn't even call this a book report...
The first copy is this:
In Welcome to the Family there was a boy by the name of Nicholas who had a tradition of going to a by the name of "Camp Wannameka" when it was a tradition well broken after his parent decided to go to Brooklyn instead WITHOUT Nicholas. With all that he was stuck at home Nana! Your turn to read the BOOK!!
So, a) to a ____ ... ???
b) this was almost one huge run-on sentence, when I told them that they needed a well-written paragraph with at least six sentences for the summary. Well-written, eh? That's it, that's all I can say about this. I won't go on because then I will start to get mean.
BUT, there is a redone version. It's as follows:
In "Welcome to the Family" the was only one main event. That main event was how his parents left him with grandma Tutti and uncle Frankie who wasn't suppose to be there, with his parents in Brooklyn for the week.
In the conclusion of the story his come home to find uncle Frankie there with a huge attitude
REALLY?!?!?!?!?!? AHHHHHlkasjdflkjsadljflkjsa
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